Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Can anyone edit my article its from a novel called the oustiders.?

Two young men are in the hospital today for showing their bravery. Ponboy Curtis and Johnny Cade saved several children from a burning church yesterday afternoon on top of Jay Mountain. Neither were worried about their lives. The children were placed outside the church unharmed. The brave boys were badly injured. Curtis is unconscious, bruised and has many burns on his body. Cade received a broken back as a result of a piece of burning timber falling on him. He has suistained severe burns and is in a critical condition. Dallas Winston, a friend of the two, went in and saved Cade, and as a result, injured himself. The two heroes said that, “they had been living in the church for a week”. The reason being that Cade murdered is beliedved to have murdered an eighteen year old teenager and the police were after them. The alledged murder is because of the ongoing fights between Socs (Socials) and Greasers. Socs are the rich people who live on the west-side of town and Greasers are the poor people who live on the east-side. Johnny is believed to have killed a Soc because one night because several Socs jumped on Curtis and Cade. Cade is alleged to have used a switch-blade and stabbed a Soc. Randy, best friend of the teen who was murdered even said, “it was the Socs fault and the boys were just fighting in self-defense”. Cherry Valance, girlfriend of Bob, a Soc, said, “Bob was drunk and was looking for a fight on the night he got killed”. The two boys have become national heroes. But still the boys have to appear in the court to prove themselves right!

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